wow that's extremely depressing, but it's god, i don't know if i'm supposed to, but i'm getting images of teenage boys stabbing baseballs into their fathers... :o *sigh* i love my dad... thank goodness...

Interesting. I can relate to this...well aside from the whole son part. My father is a complete **. Lolz, but it's okay, sometimes life's better without him, although it might be easier to have just stabbed him, as explained in the poem.

Hey this is great! Loved the opening, and adored this part: "I am defiant to your wishes Ruthless to your persistent calls I am your son As you proclaim" Nicely written. See ya!