i like it. hope you do 2 cuz u need to keep writing it. so... i'll ttyl. bye.
-dumb pixie-

Like it?

Very much so.

It is a must that you continue this story. But don't get so wrapped up in it you forget about your others! ! ! ! ! ! !

Beautiful, beautiful, though I must agree to the "I had to admit, she was right, though I wouldn't admit it." awkwardness. Anyway, sounds like a good foundation to a story, if you ever get around to writing it.

- One of your sister's best friends.

P.S. Read my stories too, please.

I think this is a really great start.
However, if you had started at the awards ceremony rather than with the little prologue, I think the story would have flowed a little better. There was also one line:
"I had to admit, she was right, not that I was going to admit it."
That was a bit confusing.
Other than that, this has the potential to become a really good story. I'm glad that you're finally writing original fiction.

Omg that was so good! Please continue, I like it already! where did you come up with the name for this story? I like it alot. Anyway, awesome chapter with great characters. I could see myself liking this story very quickly