Reviews for From the perspective of a fallen angel

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mispeled 2003-06-17 ch 8,	abusewell well, my little habit of reviewing late has finally caught up to me, now i, like the rest of your eager audience, am awaiting you next chapter. dare i say pokes
mispeled 2003-06-17 ch 7,	abusevery confused, there is only one more chapter and there better be some sort of something in it or im going to go crazy. by the way, the "=" sign and hte "bwahaha" seemed unnessecary. did you notice that i said "quite" twice in my review of chapter 5. i find that quite odd
mispeled 2003-06-17 ch 6,	abusehm, it seems all plot has now gone to a slash scene, thats not all bad, but the ending of the chapter was abrupt, but the advantage of reviewing things late is that i know there are two more
mispeled 2003-06-17 ch 5,	abusequite an appropriate title. the bit about marylin manson and sanity was quite amusing to me
mispeled 2003-05-30 ch 4,	abusereally well done. but, who caught him?
mispeled 2003-04-28 ch 3,	abusethat was slightly more twisted, but i have to admit, its fun. i like the interview stuff, no progress, just commentary
mispeled 2003-04-28 ch 2,	abusei like that quote about "who am i talking to anyway" i've done that while writing in journals n'stuff. that magazine thing was creative too. this is getting fun . . .
Leah Claire 2003-04-08 ch 8,	abuseGah! YOU'RE the one who's been a bad influence on 'zebra with short chapters. BAD! Uh. . .now hurry up and write the next one. Hmm, I actually like slash. Go figure. You should seriously consider learning to capitalize. I don't even think about it anymore. I mean, it will only improve the presentation of your writing. It might even suck in a few more readers. But if you don't--well, I don't care. I'VE found the story and that's all that matters. The rest of the world can deal.
Leah Claire 2003-04-08 ch 4,	abuseI was gonna wait until the last chapter to review, but I had to agree with Puck about Linkin Park. PAH! Also, I like the song you used for this. Hell, I just like this whole story. See, I avoided reading it for a long time simply because I read the author's note and got spooked by the lack of capitalization and the mis-spelling of the word "sentence" (incidentally, you spelled it "sentance".) I mean, usually, I'm not wrong--usually, if there's a spelling mistake in the first paragraph, the rest of the story is a goddamned nightmare! But--ahem--I'm woman enough to admit when I'm wrong. I figured I'd better give it another chance since whohasthezebra likes it and she has excellent taste :) er. . .yeah. Anyway, I'll do another review at the latest chapter.
whohasthezebra 2003-03-24 ch 8,	abuseYou better damn well be updating soon. PooR JOHNNY!! and whos the guest. damn you damn you damn you. rootless is taking its sweet time. you are spoiled ;). :( poor puck and johnny. i loved pucks bit about presidential candidates. you and your mongooses...mongeese? KANGAROOS!
Xy Hapu 2003-03-24 ch 8,	abuseCol, I really enjoyed the suspensfullness of this one, and the cliffhangery thing at the end. And it was long! Whee! I didn't know angles could get sick. Wonder what's up with Johnny (love the comparisons between him and a cat, btw :)) Oh, and Puck is the horniest living creature to have ever existed. Lol, he says '' like 2 dozen times in a row :) Hehe, just realized Puck rhymes with . . . coincidence? Not in my conspiracy-theorist mind :)
whohasthezebra 2003-03-23 ch 7,	abuseHehehe. your chapters are TOO short. i like how brians couch has eaten spines into your stories :D. im impatiently stamping my feet for more, damn you! i havent found a decent flow of conciousness story besides this one.
Xy Hapu 2003-03-20 ch 7,	abusestarves to death :P Hehe, shortness aside, that was a very . . . different chapter (can't think of a better fitting word for the moment :P). It seemed a bit happier than the previous ones, which fits really well since he just found Johnny the cat and is prolly in a better mood than he's been in years. I am officially a wingphobic as of today. Those things sound like more pain than they're worth :) They're more appropriate for this story than more angellicly wings tho, I love all the pain and angst you put in all the chapters. Yes, I am twisted :P
whohasthezebra 2003-03-19 ch 6,	abuseKitty! and you dare glares you teaser you...i agree, world cultures is boring! though you dont have to draw europe :(( THis is phantasmagoric, and now that i think about it, your johnny IS kitten like. plays cat and mouse, etc. specially yours: incredibly rambunctious and only pays attention to you. well dahlink this rocked. now update quicker, you.
Xy Hapu 2003-03-17 ch 5,	abuse"In the background i hear the music of marilyn manson and relax a bit knowing whomever owns this place is most obviously sane." Hehe, that was a cool quote, just had to point it out :) Hehe, thought it might have been Johnny, hope ya explain some more about why he came back and why he decided to rescue him before ya finish the story. Oh, and the milk and cookies part was hilarious, especially with all the torture equipment in the same room, it almost sounds as if Johnny has multiple personalities or something. Hehe, that would be cool, like that skinny ugly dude from Lord of the Rings. O, I didn't realize this was nearing the end. Looks like Puck just might have a happy end, yay for Puck! I just hope it's not gonna be -too- 'happy', if you know what I mean . . . oi, my virgin eyes :)

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