Oh. More pretty.

Wow... That was, for the lack of anything to write, deep. The emotion was there, and it was such a good poem that I managed to ignore the non-capitilizing bit. (Just a thing that tends to bother me, but not this time.) Well done!

~Cinaed

I *love* this poem. It rings so sickeningly true with things both in my life, and my work. Good job. I'm off to read more of your stuff.

That's powerful.

WOW very dark and kinda scary...I like that line you are the alpha, the omega. The first and last...GJ ^_^

oh yes...i know this one...