That's wonderful.
'There's no such thing as an angel
Only survivors on broken wings
You can't fly with a halo
What's that silver-white ring above your head?'
Those lines were so good, I love them.

Awesome. It's not short. I can see it as sort of a rock song, or a beautful ballad... whatever. oops g2g, I'll review more of your songs later! ~PC