wow, this was beautiful. loved every bit of it!

A very bright and optimistic poem. It's quite refreshing! ^_^
~Caelestius Zaden

Bravo! That part about the cage and the chains was great.


~Heart of the Sword

Good! Thanks for reviewing Petals!

I love the continuity of this poem. Interesting idea, repeating a whole stanza or whateveryoucallthems to emphasize your point. Good poem.

-shadowdancer

lot of W wors in this one but we've got to live our 5 W's. Ahh all the questions of life canoot be stated with out the letter W. Ok enough of my W prasiing... and thats the LETTER.... NOT the person (dear godess help us all). I think i get the emotional gist of this one, simple but meaingful message. well portrayed.

great song! sweet and beautifully written, i must say. good job! keep writing! and thanks for the reviews. for the one on my Christmas poem, i'll say that God did let His son die, but Jesus did not stay dead. He rose three days later, and ascended to heaven like 40 days later. so He did shed blood, but still is living now, He's no longer dead. well, thanks anyway!