I liked that you showed the boys getting adopted, and giving them slightly new names was a nice touch. And who can resist the kawaii-ness that was Ri when he visited Taisuke? I feel so bad for both of them... the second kiss was cute, though. *prayers to the Kami for Taisuke's sake* Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

That was nice. Having Taisuke fight the mind-control after Ri got hurt and then moreso after he voiced his feelings aloud was very well done. I especially liked how you had Ri "search" for his power call. The ending part between Kakeru and Ri was *awesome*; in character, comical, and romantic. *aw* Poor Taisuke-kun... Odaijini! Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

After all of your teasing, *that* was how they had to kiss? *grumble* While I admit that it was incredibly inventive, I'm also awed by how I had *never* considered it a possibility. But, then, I guess that's brownie points for you. Congrats on an amazing episode-I can only hope that they manage to bring Taisuke back. *whimper* I don't like him being evil. *longer whimper* Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

NO! TAISUKE-KUN! Okay, now that I have that out of my system... Kakeru's little emotional part was very well done and ending with a return to his sarcastic side-the "meaningful" comment-was nice. Again a new twist to the battle, and what could Meiro and Ja'aku's comments mean about Taisuke's untapped power? Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

This was a wonderfully written episode, ASR! Between the boys' akward moments together and Ri nearly burning his dinner, it was definitely a believeable cutesy episode _. I also like the dialogue between Kakeru and Ri-very in character and very appropriate. Keep it up! Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

This was again a unique method of having one of the Warriors "evolve", as you put it. It was also a little scary to hear Spirit speak to Space that way, though at the same time I can believe it. Ending with Ja'aku and Meiro was a nice touch, though Kakeru's last comment was highly amusing. While Kakeru had mentioned his abilities becoming stronger, I haven't really noticed that until this episode. Maybe that was the way you intended it, I'm not sure. I was also a little confused as to *how* Kakeru managed to get all of the voices "sorted out". Perhaps it was sheer force of will, but that was still lost on me. As far as plot, though, you did fine. Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

WAI! I absolutely adored your subtle mention of Taiyou and Shirena's drive for perfection being what held her back the whole time (go Ice for reminding her she's only human!) Unfortunately, though, I noticed that you got a little sloppy with spelling and a little bit of grammar in this episode. The inclusion of the song lyrics was a nice touch. Then, of course, who could resist the little Taisuke and Ri moments? You are building a fine foundation with them, starting with the angsty feelings and then Taisuke holding his hand when Meiro brought on the darkness. I can't wait to read more... don't worry, I'll wait until tomorrow... in the *later* AM. _;; I've had my fix. Doumo arigatou, soshite gambatte ASR! Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

That was very cute, having Iz's words help Talia awaken her power, as well as her reflecting on her diary entries. I actually started to feel bad for the bad boys again; it's good that you worked that in. I really thought that Taisuke was going to talk to them after all of that! Darn it! Well, the server wasn't letting me post a critique so I went & read the next one anyway! _ Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

Oh just great, now I *have* to read the next episode! Well, congratulations ASR; you have me on the edge of my seat. Plus, you have me all worked up about Moeru and Taisuke both liking Ri. *whimper* I really like how you let Ja'aku use his illusion powers to fool her, and then to let her retaliate and fully realize her power. Not much else I can say except for wonderful episode and watch out for little misspellings and little lost grammar pieces. Gambatte, Taisuke! Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

The wonderful anime/manga moment with Kakeru in the shrine was *very* well placed and Iz's feelings bringing out his power was exceptionally well done as well. There were a few word choices that had be confused, such as anomie, but the for the most part I was deeply impressed by this episode, including the entire ending sequence after Iz's battle. Yatta for romance, *especially* YAOI! _ Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

Yes, after your relentless taunting I had to read at least one or two more tonight. This one was particularly intriguing, and I think it was good because it held a special significance for Jurei, which was important. It managed to bring out the ups and downs of both her Neo-Xavix life and Earth life. You also managed to slip in just a little bit of cuteness with Kakeru which is always appreciated. All in all, it was a very well done episode. Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

This episode was very nicely played out. It was good to see that the wings hurt when they came out, for reality's sake, and that Craig was thoroughly in awe of them. I'm also glad to see that the "baddies" are experiencing pain as well. I wonder what the broken bracelet will do? _ Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

I'm glad that you explained why Ja'aku and Meiro left, as well as had them reprimanded for it. It's also nice to see that at least *one* human being can figure out who the Warriors are. _ The notes about the new transformations were cool, but a little redundant. As hard as it might seem, I try to at least jumble up the language, or just generalize if I can't, because I know it's more frustrating to the reader. Moving into Taisuke's point of view was interesting and a unique perspective on the Warriors at school as well as on the battlefield. The animated wings on their transformation pens was, as Kakeru said, "a new one." Nice touch & keep up the good work! Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

In the beginning portion where you introduce all of the characters (which is a nice recap), you initially make a comment (I assume from Ri) using the double-slash (/) which I thought was the English that you use for Craig. Additionally, I can't figure out why in the world Ja'aku and Meiro just up & left the Warriors, when they obviously had the upper hand. The other parts were very well written to remind the reader of the characters as well as mention Taisuke () and show how Meiro and Ja'aku "awakened". I can't wait to read more! Fruchan o / Shin-No-Nekochan

Coolies! I liked this chapter. Talia is so cool!