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| Prisoner-11 2006-03-13 ch 7, | abuseYay! Lol, this is a great story, and I hope to be able to read the rest! |
| Nikerym 'Ksherea 2005-06-01 ch 7, | abuseah! last chapter to be archived! and there's no link! gah... if it's still floating about the web somewhere, and if you manage to get this, can you send me the link? i really really like this story! i want to see more! and it's... not there! and i can only find birds when i search the web for it! it's very sad... but if you would be so kind as to send me the link? if it's there? if you've managed to write any more? that would be supremely awesome! thanks in advance if you manage it, sorry in case i bugged you and i do really like the story! Email: shadowedistar@yahoo.com, in case you didn't want to search through my author page to get to it. |
| Kuri Anami 2003-09-11 ch 7, | abuseEto! I liked it! ^^ And it's about TIME you updated! Not dissapointed at all though! And why is this being moved..away? Is ... soemthing... going to happen that FP.net won't allow? Something... above... R? :P! Don't mind me, that was just pervertedness. XD Continue, soon though! *bookmarks website* :) The UNfamous Kuri Anami (soon to be known as CottonStory Inc. with the brother and the sister! :) |
| WindStarsAndWave 2003-02-15 ch 6, | abuseFeh! I hate you! You put a cliff hanger!! Write the next chapter before I. Wack you with The Frying Pan of Doomâ„¢. Or something. This is great, keep up the good work! |
| Kuri Anami 2003-02-08 ch 6, | abuseOi! Write more, PLEASE write more!!! This was promising ebfore, and it still is! I love it! Continue! The UNfamous Kuri Anami |
| tmelange1 2003-02-08 ch 6, | abuseI cry foul! There isn't another chapter for me to read! And we just got to the good part! I hope to see more of your story very soon! |
| tmelange1 2003-02-08 ch 5, | abuseI really like the way you're developing the Xyme/Roc relationship. And I like that Roc is true to his characterization at the end of this chapter--that he leaves instead of staying. |
| tmelange1 2003-02-08 ch 4, | abuseYou know, for a minute there I thought that Xyme could have been leading Roc into a trap. The whole going to Thanatos thing was marvelously ambiguous. Kudos. This story is completely additctive. |
| tmelange1 2003-02-08 ch 3, | abuseWonderful! Wonderful! Roc and Xyme are so adorable! I like them both. Great job! |
| tmelange1 2003-02-08 ch 2, | abuseThis story is completely addictive-and well written. I would say the distinct characterizations are the strongest part of the story, but your world-building skills are a close second since I feel you've smoothly integrated the reader into an interesting scenario with just enough scenery to make it interesting but not so much as to lose sight of the plot line. Kudos. |
| tmelange1 2003-02-08 ch 1, | abuseGreat beginning! Your characters are very distinct. Kudos. I'm looking forward to the next chapter...which I'm gonna read right now! |
| kawaiiangal 2003-02-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseAWw. You have to write more. Keep it up!!! |
| Surtout Seul 2003-02-08 ch 6, | abuseSQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! ^___^ that is the best ending to a chapter EVER!!! ^___^ can't wait fo more ... I also can't believe I didn't find this before ... WHERE have I been! +fav |
| Kuri Anami 2003-01-29 ch 4, | abuseYou MUST MUST MUST continue! I love the story so far! It has so much potential!! YEAH!! ^-^ S-A's good too, every once 'n' awhile. Tee-hee. So yes..very good. Continue PDQ/ASAP! Paleze! Eto... The UNfamous Kuri Anami |
| neeni. ;D 2003-01-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseWell, I've gotta say this is amazing so far. I love the dialogue, especially; you have a way with words. I'm surprised there aren't many reviews for this yet, but I'm sure they'll pile up soon. ^.- Awesome, awesome story. Very creative with the names. Roc's so adorable. ;D Keep writing and post the next chapter soon~! I rarely find stories on ff.net that I actually look forward to updating, so you better do so. Lata. |