this is really good as wlel. the only thing i'd change would be the last line. it makes it sounds almsot like a sales pitch or something. but otherwise beautifully written and thought provoking

OOh...deep. Wish I could write like you.

Wow, it's one of those things, that's so abstract it makes sense... Yeah, really awesome work *claps*

Jesus Chirst. That. wow. You've got it. I can never find words to describe the things I want to say, but you. You've got it. You've got it, and you said it, loud and clear.

*blinks* wow. you got it right on in that round0about way that the explination has to be written in. this is awesome.