This reminded me of "Wake me up when September Ends" by Green Day. Good song. Good poem too=)

This is beautiful. The ryhming scheme makes it flow very smoothly.

You're an awsome poet! It was short but good (I will not use the word 'sweet' lol) but it was really awsome and I could never write anything like that ^_^

~Pltzchen~

keep on with your poems they are really good from what i'v seen