Very cool! I like the way you left just a little bit of doubt in there when you said "Can it be that he's blue? Or is it just you?" but then in the same way you completely closed it off at the end too. Very creative. Loved it! oh and thanks for reviewing my poem! :>

WOW!
you know...what's UP with BLUE?!? you should make a poem about..um...red...pink...orange...
purple...red again...green...violet...red violet...red orange...hazel..brown...
you know?
you'd be very good at it. ::grins::

well this was well done, i liked it a lot.

Blue is my favorite color.

This is good - there are a lot conotations of the word.

I wrote a poem called Blue, too. ^^;

Keep writing!

~Namir Swiftpaw

That was lovely! Rather captivating poem itself, kind of like a song, nice rhyming thing you got there.