Eh...well, it's not exactly my type of story, but it was really good for what it was. I think the main problem is that you need to break your story into paragraphs--that and the fact that some punctuation in the quotations of your story is kinda messed up. But it's pretty good writing. Thanks for your [not really helpful] reply to my story, Monopoly...I thought it more of an insult rather than a critique, but whatever you say...good bye.

You are my favorite author you are so good. How did you think of this. I haven't read it all so I have a question since the name is Vampire SAI are you going to have sais (the three prong daggers that Elektra from daredevil uses) in it.?

Great vampire story

There is NOTHING on this Earth better than a great vampire story.

This is wonderful. Please continue writing, I love this. It's very pleasing and the characters are wonderful.