AHEM! - where is an update of this wonderful story we ask.
I am suffering from LORCKD (Lack Of Really Cute/Cool Kiwi diseases!

oh wow! i wanna a kiwi! this is SO funny! write more please!

GR DIE STUPID SPAROS DIE DONT INSULT WIDDLE KIWIS OR TURKEYS! teehe i had too much sugur... and is going back to school from suspention dont ask

i can't stop laughing...::falls over clutching her stomach:: snerk...trying...to...contain...ludicrus...
laughter...must...retain...dignified...imposing...vampiric...composure...SCREW THAT! BWHAHAHAHA! POWER TO THE KIWIS! THIS IS FRICKIN' HILARIOUS! I WAS READING IT OUT LOUD AND MY BROTHER WAS SCARED! AND HE'S WEARING HIS STEVE SHIRTS SO HE'S SURE ONE TO TALK! ::cackles maniacly:: BWHAHAHAHAHA! THIS IS SO GREAT! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE OF THIS! MOREMOREMORE! I DON'T CARE HOW BLOODY WRONG THAT SOUNDS, WE WANT MORE! I THINK THAT THE SPARROW KING NEEDS A BULLDOZER! AND I'LL HAVE TO READ YOUR OTHER NEW STUFF TOO. oh, on a SLIGHTLY saner note, are you gonna be able to do pepper's display thing? i'm gonna need a response...like...really really soon. i finished the written crap, but are you too sick to do it or what?? anyway, chipperistic spiffy job. i've decided to spare you from today's seto kaiba rant...talk to ya later. or in about 10 minutes if i have the opportunity to read your other stuff...::grin:: KIWIS! HAHA!

*^O^*~~alli~~*^O^*

Do I sense a comdy story coming on? Oh well. It's funny and that's all that counts, right? though it could do to be a bit longer. that's all
(you know who I am BTW. *cough*pyro*cough*)

pretty funny...needed to be amused (in class and bored)...liked it...
-By the way...you'd prolly be amused with something i wrote..."woodpecker vs. Kiwi"...anyways..ttyl...ciaos

interesting, definetely interesting... and while on the topic of interesting, you have an intersting BIO... but another chapter sounds good :D

CONTINUE YOUR DAMM STORY DAMM IT! I AM ON THE EDGE OF MY SEAT THINKING ABOUT THOSE CUTE KIWIS PLANS ALL HAIL THE KIWIS *turns into a kiwi and runs around the room*

Its interesting, but funny, but weird
it doesn't matter, im weird too
zoombinis rock
as does bob the llama

YIPEEEE!!!! that is SOOOOOO COOL!!!!!!!! all of us kiwi at heart followers are bowing at you feet! please up date this soon!!!

HILARIOUS!!!!! THAT IS SOOOOO COOL!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! ::uneasy laughter:: your writing that is...well, we're done doing pointless **. I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOU TO WRITE MORE!!! and update the other fics, you snail stuck in jello!!!! wait, being a snail would be fun! anyway...and guess what, all you **heads!?!? ::points menacing finger at other reviewers and fans:: i KNOW MORE ABOUT THE KIWIS THAN AAAALLLL OF YOU!!! SO THERE!!! HA!! DID YOU EVER HAVE A BLUE CRESTED KIWI DRAWN ON YOUR HAND PRACTICALLY EVERY DAY IN FIFTH GRADE!? we think not. YOU SUCK!!! BWAH HA HA HA!!! ::disappears in a puff of blue smoke:: gosh golly gee, i'm supposed to be gone...why am i still here!?! i am soo annoying. well, we're gonna go read timeless and rant some more. go me!!!

~evil queen of the bloodsucking undead hamsters coven!!!! and malik, who might comment in your other story~

That was good... but update Across Time, girl! We've all been waiting 4-ever.

Anyways, Lol for the story. I'll read your next chapter if you update you Yu-Gi-Oh fic within the next week ;)