This... oh, well. that... planet placey... was too much like our little blue planet.

NAHA!
Cool! Area-51, dun, dun, dun. Area-51, dun, dun, dun.
Good story! I find it fun to go and see what the people who review me write themselves.
Reading through your titles, yes I read them all, I feel sorry for you. I hope to keep up a correspondence with you.
AH!
It's the cheese of doom!

Hello, I have been gone for a while (High school is harder than I thought it would ), but I wanted to read some more of your stuff!
What I really like about your stories is that there always seems to be some sort of outer space thing thrown in, as well as a traitor somewhere (here, so far, it seems to be Albert).
Constructive criticism: Only Zoe and Caitlyn seem to have lives bad enough that they'd want to run away for real. The others' parents are somewhat normal, and it just seems that Brian, Brooke, and Scott don't get along well with them.
I will finish the story now... ^_^ I sent this review after reading only the first two chapters.

Umm... my laptop isn't letting me past here, to any chappie... the beginning, at least, is good... I'll be back.

Fast-paced-- I like.

Sounds scifi to me...

its done and I have to say that I injoyed it very much! keep up the good work thank you
john

LOL! You've finished it! Great job! Really, to have such patience as to finish a story is very hard. Often I have been thinking about stopping MY stories halfway.

This is great! The ending is pretty good, you know, slightly similar to The Animorphs.

Hope you write another one soon!

Keep on writing!

cant wait till the next post keep them coming
YOHAN

hm, chapter two isn't bad. A litte fast in the delivery, but I like how you're giving us a little plot to go with our story. Most beginning writers (and even some experienced ones, just so you don't think I'm patronizing you, hehe) put down a summary and assume that's all we'll need. So they start the story and BOOM, we don't know how we got there or when.

A good opening. A few gramatical errors, but I won't dwell on those.

I'll add this to my favorites so I can read more of it later.

ok that was ok could have been better the parents were sorry and blaiming themself for the kids actions thats correct but where is the anger and denile then acceptance that they are gone? dont take it wrong but that is the stages of grief i know i lost a daughter.
john

you promised and you delivered thanks when is the next chapter due out?
john

Great job.