I think you have alot more life wisdom than you give yourself credit for.
It was simplistic, but I like that. Nt many purer ways to get the message across

"Love is perfect, regardless of all else."
Perfect Chaos concurs >O
no seriously, this poem is very meaningful, and I enjoyed reading it ^__^.

This is good and so true. Keep up with all your writings. They are all so good.

Kitsune-chan:Oh!! We are very, very, VERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!! SORRY!!!!!!

Neko-chan:*nods* Now Inu is wondering if she can even write a chapter or story without being related to other fics.

Kitsune:Or course, I don't know which story the chapter is related too, because I haven't been in ff.net for awhile. So........

Neko:......

Kitsune:NANI!??

Neko:So, we'll he writing the story for now. It seems Inu seems to be scared of going on the compy to write stories.

Inu:*from the background* I'm not scared!! I'm not sure of myself anymore!!!

Neko:Isn't that still the same? *looks at Kitsune*

Inu:NO!

Neko:^__________________________^ It is!!!

Kitsune:.......Anyhoo.....*bows* W'ere sorry for eternalty! I don't know how else to express our sorryness.

Neko:*nods and bows* I just hope you can forgive Inu-chan. She really didn't mean to come out the way it did!!

Kitsune:*nods* Nice poem by the way..I like poems like this. ^^

cool.