Nice Poem.

I think I am the most clueless person alive...I noticed you review for Rachela's Daughter and thought you were new. Then I found out your email adress and emailed you. Later I noticed that you had reviewed a bunch of my stuff (Thank you btw) and I have actually been talking to you for awhile now. *taps Foot* I am clueless...

But great poem:)

wow! beautiful description. good rhyming... think i;ll read more...

Good job. This is a really nice poem. The scene is so peaceful. ^_^ Write more!

Woo, the ending really got me!
it was so sweet to start with, the ending got me especially hard!
Great development! You're gifted!
Write more soon!

great poem! i like this a lot! great imagery! you have a neat way with words. very cool! good job on this! keep writing! and thanks for the review!

ohh i like this very much. i hope you write more poetry in the near future! and thanx for the reviews!

This is a beautiful picture you have painted with words. I liked how you used rhyming to add to your meaning and not take away from it. This image is just so uplifting. I am glad to have read it.

Thanks so much for reviewing my pieces!
Jade

Wow! This was a great poem! I could picture it so well! Great job! :)

That is an excellent poem, sensual and brilliant and with an unusual rhyme scheme and punctuation. I will have to read some more of your work. P.S. Thanks for the lovely review.

Interesting.. and why are some stuff capitalized in the middle of the sentence?? but I like the ending and the "a ball of gold does peek seeming almost at first" - Chrissy :) :P

Kool

Very nice.


~Heart of the Sword