   Your Execution 2009-11-07 . chapter 11Yay! I finished! :D awesome story! |
 pinkguppie 2009-10-27 . chapter 11In chapter 11 it says Parker has spoken to Parker's Mom - and I'm assuming you mean Cole's Mom.
Very cute story :) |
 proud-rider-of-the-short-bus 2009-04-24 . chapter 1great story so far! |
 3DarkGoddess3 2009-03-25 . chapter 11Good story. I liked the characters. They are a sweet couple. |
 Erica71167 2009-02-13 . chapter 11Good story! I really liked it. Great job! |
 gulistanlik 2009-02-13 . chapter 5Okay she should've waited for him, tried to make it work. She should've confronted him about her worries, sighs. |
 I Murder on Impulse 2008-09-21 . chapter 11BRILLIANT STORY!
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 Paddy 2008-07-29 . chapter 11 It's funny because I just saw Goldfinger play the other day! Nice job! |
 theslykit 2008-03-15 . chapter 1i love this story! :D |
| ZsaZsa 2008-02-02 . chapter 11 Fantastic story! I absolutely loved it! |
 EdwardDazzlesMe 2007-10-30 . chapter 11Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable.
God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :)
Keep it up!
EdwardDazzlesMe |
 honey splattered brains 2007-05-17 . chapter 11i love it! its hilarious! :]
nice job!
-athena |
 aussiegrl5070 2007-03-31 . chapter 11I have been looking for a good band story. I finally found it! This is a great story. I love how the girls open the show with jokes :D |
 Lyrical.Love 2007-01-27 . chapter 11i love your stories
they're short and sweet =] |
 AJS 2006-12-17 . chapter 11This is cute. i think that if their love managed to last 3 years while they were separated, then surely they'll be able to last 10 years + forever more when together and in love as well. I guess it was a little confusing as to why exactly Diesel broke up with Cole in the first place but I guess it was because she felt insecure etc. I dont' know. That's just kind of what it seemed like. I'm really glad that the two of them got together. I don't understand why Cole just went out like that and started making out with some groupie but I guess he was just trying to get over Diesel after he figured that she wasn't ready for anything anymore. He still should have talked things over with her before just assuming that that was what she had meant.
But yeah. It's really good to see them getting that happy ending finally. The 2nd article that Dan wrote was kind of weird but whatever. I don't know. It just seemed a little short but was the point just to say that Cole & Diesel were now together? Anyways, yeah, this was cute. Is the sequel about the two of them as well? :x
-- Alyssa |
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