Reviews for Gorgeous - FictionPress.com

Reviews For: Gorgeous - Reviews: Page 1 of 7

dawn's unforgiving darkness 2006-11-09 ch 6,	abusei dont like josh nemore he expects jeremy to trust him again when hes the neighbor what a !
Iuno 2005-04-15 ch 13,	abusewahh! it made me cry! how could josh leave jeremy behind...they should have eloped...ahahahaha very good job! three thumbs up!
pneumothorax 2005-04-09 ch 2,	abuseInteresting. In some parts it sounds almost like a memory or a tale rather than actually being in his character. The end of the chapters are unusual - kind of like a conclusion really rather than an end to action.
Saturn-hime 2004-07-21 ch 7,	abuseI got lost somewhere in there...are they on the floor of the hotel or on a bed? it doesn't really matter...i'm just curious XDD
Kirika Moonshadow 2004-05-29 ch 13, anon.	abuseAWESOME STORY! I just found it and read all of it in one sitting. Really well written! Start the sequel now, maybe?
JESS 2003-06-14 ch 13, anon.	abuseplease let jeremy find josh again I hope in the sequel they will meet up a still be single. You did a great job and I enjoyed reading this story very very very very very much I hope you UPDATE for the Sequel very very very very soon!
Jess 2003-06-14 ch 14, anon.	abusePLEASE
nopinion 2003-06-10 ch 14,	abusewell that sucks pouts where's the fluffy happy ending with cotton candy? :( I suppose that's why it's your story not mine. But I loved it! nop
nopinion 2003-06-10 ch 13,	abusesome fluttering wonderfuls, about time, at the end of a horrible, sad segment. Bastards. I'm pretty keen on your story. nop
nopinion 2003-06-10 ch 3,	abuselol... funny funny... digging the cold shower. nop
nopinion 2003-06-10 ch 1,	abuseI was a little confused as to the status of their relationship. The first paragraph made me think Josh was oblivious but by the end I'm seeing that is completely not the fact. Just one thing, nop
i-nv-u50 2003-05-19 ch 14,	abuseack!! you cant end it there!! I hope there's a sequel, jeremy has to find josh even if he is going to the wrong place O.o; post the sequel soon!! ^^;;
cordy 2003-05-12 ch 14, anon.	abusewa! i love this fic! it's so sad though. i hope Jeremy will find Josh! i can't wait till you're next fic!
Arlene 2003-05-03 ch 14, anon.	abuseThe end? the end? how can it end there?! No no no! J&J must be happy...together! not apart, not apart! Ah! That was a lot goin' on there missy, ( I think I'll rename it "J&J's wild ride" aka chap 14 :0) )But wow. I think it made it all the more poingant that after all the time we get to know the characters and we can sympathize with them, it doesn't work out. Its almost more realistic, becase we often see conflict resolved in a nice neat little way that works out for the main characters. As we know, life doesnt work that way and is a bit crazy, ironic, sad and misunderstood. I think you captured that here. Sequel? Don't dangle it in front of me! I want I want! Heheh Great job, a completed fic is such an accomplishment and a labor of dedication. Muy bien chica!
Arlene 2003-05-03 ch 13, anon.	abuseGuess who's back? Well I suppose it's rather obvious now, isn't it? :0) I was in total agony because i wanted to know what was going to happen and I couldn't get to a computer! The humanity! But now I am a very happy camper because i got one more chapter and my can of coke and a box of tissues :0) answer to question: I got the impression that they had been together, but not for a heck of a long time. And it was mainly because J was commenting on how gorgeous J was almost as if the novelty of having him hand't worn off yet( a la newlywed symdrome) Geez, I'm not too romantic am i? :0) On to the next chapter! btw, I really liked the use of the word gorgeous again in this chapter. Unless I missed it, I don't think we have heard it in awhile, so it made just the right amount of impact.

Return to Top