1. existance is said twice too close together: "we question our existance on earth, in which our very existance was created by God,"

2. "we see the world in black and white; we see it in different ways"... i'd insert "yet" in there... (thats just me)

3. "We are seduced by life and yet so far attached from it."

The answer is 42.

Well written, although I have to confess I like 'I died again' better...this one brings together all the issues that we face and all the things that confront us in a lifetime...and it makes you think about things that surround you that's for sure! This one tends to stir your emotions tho...for example, thinking of all the wrong things in the world can get you down or angry.
You write well - don't stop now!! :)

hmmm.. WOW.. that was great willie..
never thought that you could write something so smart and sensitive..
so affectionate.. so beautiful.. Its full of emotions and questions..
I already know what life is, yet I don't care.. anymore..
thank god there are other people who do..

Good work. But, I don't question the way I feel or am. But I do question existance, are we the product of evolution or a product of God, because they both make no sense. I just like to believe in the idea that there is a God. But is there is a God he is a sick individual.

Very interesting and emotional work ! You should be considering some sort of literary future :-) Will have to have a read of your other works now..

Hey deafguy! You read my Life sucks poem so I came here to check out your life poem! And, from one poet to another, I think this is really good! ^^ God, I love poetry...

~*~KG

Hey deafguy...I'm impressed. Keep up the work..

WONDERFUL.....very talented

well i've prob told u dis, but you've thought a lot bout dis life we're in...hehe
as evry1 else i wish life wasn't complicated...keke
well what u said in dat poem is well said...well done!

life does suck at certain times.....but that's why we have friends!!!!!!!!!

I think this is an insightful poem from a sensitive individual (sport) who should be congratulated on his spantacular effort and poignant thoughts. :D

it was very kewl
William has an abillity to write very groovy poems
good onia willy keep the good work up

Very, very true. You reviewed mine and I thought I'd take a look at yours. You have to admit though- four letter words aren't always simple. But I have to admit- four letter words can be less complex than we could ever imagine.

That is a really good poem and it is so true. I really like it. Good job...keep up the good work!