I like!! I like it alot!! I'm not really sure why, that I find hard to explain, even to me. But I think it's because it's easy to see that it's written with a rage that is fired by passion. Something which I think we are all able to feel!

Very good.

very angrey..
so angrey. and full of imagination.. full of regret..
hatrede based on a reason of love..
it is so strange..

Wow. That made me go all tingly. Those are the feelings I am going through at the moment DG. But I would not be able to express myself like that. That was really good. Well done matey.

More well expressed deep feelings William :) An I can understand them completely. Love and hate, admire and despise !! Its amazing how you can feel both at the same time :)

I felt so much of what you were saying in the poem that it was like it made me want to know right from the start who you were thinking about when you wrote it. Hating them so much for nothing and loving them so much as well...was very powerfult writing. couldn't help but question what the relationship had been about as I read. make sense

WOW...i am speechless....

u realli expressed ur feelings in dis poem......sounds like u took out all ur anger in just a poem....good effort!

This is a pretty spot on peom for one thats sposed to be losely based - what a champ. Three cheers for sport!

that one is really good too. The love hate relationship defines life. i really like it...Alot!

hahahaha **-hole get it ** hole lol ahhhh thats really funny...ehehe u lol that cracks me up...ummm SOMETIMES i eat chocolate and i get pimples...good poem i liked ur other two better...every one!! lookout for stuff written by deafguy!!...worth readin!!!

I don't know what to say about this one. It's very good and I like it a lot but I have to be honest and tell you that though I don't know how you feel, I still think it's very good.

lol thanx, xen! you're making me feel better every minute!!!! :D

hey there once again!
lol all i do is write u reviews!! lol!!! its fun i love it!!

well not as good as the first one but its still pretty good ur amazing how u do all this i must admit i prefer the first one but keep it up
love xen