i like this story because it shows that everyone has good in them

i like that

Hehehe, I like the beginning. It's nice. ^.^ Very simple, yet very good. ^.^

Heh...I have read some of your other stuff, and I don't know what I was expecting this to be like...but it was different! Different in a good way though!

You are an amusing boy...rollerblading in your pjs and writing funny poems! Anyway...I really did enjoy this poem...laughed quite a few times!

Writing more sounds like a great idea to me! Everyone needs a good laugh somethimes, and you are doing a good job at giving people some laughs!

aw...really liked the ending...heh...sorta strange...but interesting

um, this one actually made me laugh! Just little things which I am guessing were supposed to be funny...but it's good. She went from one end of the spectrum to the other without becoming too good about it...she proved that people can change, so long as they have the love and support of those around them, the belief in themselves and the courage to face up to their probs!

a bit harsh but so is life.very good!!

Wicked girl,eh?!
not bad.. not bad at all..
I kinda liked it.. not much of a poem..
more like an essay..
but the thought was soo good..
I liked the parts when you would talk instead of just telling a story..
more like someone who was there and not just an observer..

Awww...damn! That was good! And I'm not a bad girl, just the kind of girl who runs around in her underware and pretends she is superman, eating table laminate and drinking double cappuchinos...::looks around:: What?! =P LOL, nice poem. ^_^

So not a 'G' fic, but other then that good... some contineuty errors, like you said her parents didn't talk to her for weeks and weeks, but then after that you said that 9 monthes later the baby was born, but it would have been more like 8 monthes cause of the 'weeks and weeks' that went by. P.S. This good girl takes no offenses from this story :p

Wow...so true to life. People can change no matter how bad or wicked they may seem. So true.
Great job, keep up the work. It is a message that others need to hear and learn.

just great.....keep it up, hope there is more to come :-))))

Good poem.....i wasn't sure how u were gonna end it

You scare me like no other has scared me before. It had a happy ending but I think I am scarred for life.

Billy, were you when you sat down to write this?