|Reviews for Price of Power, The|
| FireFoxCP 12/18/03 . chapter 1
Again I'm finding myself thinking I'd like to know more. Although, if
you're writing with the intent to make the reader imagine the answers to
some of the loose ends in these stories, you're certainly giving a strong
base for them to work upon. The images you've presented evoked lots of
strong "what if" thoughts as I was reading.
As for more knowledge...how did Walker come to be so obsessed with this god
in the first place? The story starts off well, but that and other facts are
left out. I may be nitpicking too much. As before, I like the sequence of
events and flow of the written word, I guess maybe I'm a details nut. Or
I'm just not used to your particular style. I was also confused by Walker's
motivations. I mean, why was he possessed of this ravenous killing
instinct, beyond the obvious "leave no witnesses" angle that is imbued in
the writing. These are just a few things. There's more, but I tend to
ramble overly much in that vein, so I picked out the most prevalent things I
noticed. I'd be interested in talking with you sometime about it if you
want, I sometimes come across better critiquing/discussing in person than in
the written form.
| Blue Dragon-sy 11/20/03 . chapter 1
Whoa, cool story! Even though I don't really read these sort of stories (I'm more to fantasy, the ones with magic and dragons... sort of an RPG-style story _), this story really caught my attention! Keep up the good work!
| Mista Mugs 7/3/03 . chapter 1
I am astounded at your sense of creativity. I've read most of your stuff here and it all amazes me. I couldn't stop reading them. Your characters come to life on the page and the detail is just right.
| A-wolf-called-Skya 6/7/03 . chapter 1
Thats good! i got a new account, i was Thelostprincess2002 before. i liked this story! if your bored sometime, in this account, read my story Call To The Sky, it's on a wolf... a prophecy...and something she might have to sacrifice as old as love. well, keep writing !
| Lady Rheia 4/22/03 . chapter 1
whoa. I just read The Price Of Power and that story had really realistic details. Also, the whole idea of changing to the different shapes at the end was a good touch.
| ssjbookgirl 2/13/03 . chapter 1
good will give mor info latter.