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Reviews For: Destined to Die

Aurora Barrett
2004-02-04
ch 1,
I like that, but you should have made the last stanza four lines long to keep the rhythm. it seemed kind of odd that it changed right at the end. Otherwise, I reawwy, reawwy wike it. (Tweety Bird talk)
~Aurora Barrett~
loz
2003-09-04
ch 1,
I like it,alot of my poems are like this,based on this sort of feeling but they tend to say that why bother living if youre gonna die,i tried to make the reader realise,either tht or kill themsleves?opps.:(Ah well. Gotta die sum day. CYa
tofujunky
2003-07-29
ch 1,
Really enjoyed this one.
"From the moment we're born/We are destined to die" - well said
Magpie Poet
2003-04-29
ch 1,
have you read the sandman comics? if not, you should. the character Death is really cool, and the attitude of this reminds me of a short story in the series called fear of falling :)
hoellenwauwau
2003-02-02
ch 1,
Wow, cool poem. Liked it very much, nicely done!
cio, hoellenwauwau
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