Damn good. Only one typo, near the end, but I am not one to say anything about typos. :)
The beginning sucks you in and the format makes you dizzy, while the second part brings you back down in a 5:30 in the morning your upset parents just found you drinking tornados and making out with the pizza guy in the bathroom between puking session vibe. Or is that just me?
-Jessica

I've never really experienced drugs or alcohol because my health classes scare me too much of what they can do to you. But, this is a good poem, by reading it, I can see what it's like. Good job.

~Shelila~

I understand your concept but anyway alcohol and grugs are never a solution... they are just part of the problem... that you just made bigger.
"From the frying pan into the fire"

love your formatting/structure with the words stucktogether and s p a c e d o u t ... very powerful and added to the effect of the words

okay... it's an intersting view on drinking, sounds like something my health teacher would read us (no not counting the footnote) but ya, good poem.

LOL! This is greatness! I love it. I've never been drunk before or whatever but this is so cool. And I understand why people get drunk all the time. I would too if I felt like that all the time. So great poem, expressed well, and the idea's great too.
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams

"the chemicals blind your eles." yeah. I like. awesome job again, I love your imagination and your uncanny ability to make your words as real as possible, with like no effort? I don't know thats what it seem like. if you ever get your work published, give me a call, I'll buy a bunch!
Jasmine

Well done. You did a really good job describing the feeling. I like this one quite a bit
Thanks for reviewing

interesting, very descriptive, never actually been drunk or high, so yeah i won't comment too much on it, but i liked the way it flowed and the contrast.

...I like the metaphor; it's very interesting. I can't really relate to the sensation of drunkenness (I'm under the age at which one can drink alcohol in my state), but I do enjoy the meatphor, and it's sort of crazy. I also like the style, where all the strange formatting made it seem more. . . awkward and out of it. It's cool. ^_^
Also, thanks for your review of "Lightning Inspiration"!

Wow, this was really good. The first part was really well written. I liked the format. The second half... well, I don't know anyone who drinks excessivly (yet) outside of the internet, so I can't really relate, but that's all right. It was still really good. Keep writing! ...Please?
~*~Kiayla~*~

love the first part, very interesting and the iamgry is beautiful and the style different, the second part is pretty good too though i dont like it quite as much, has a good flow though and a strong point, very effective, nicely done

lol. i like this. nice discription. a little long, but overall i liked this

yay! alcohol RAWKS!
i lyk all ur poems but dis has to b 1 of my faves...

Well, I am happy, when you are happy...
Big HUG!