very, very well written! great job!PS: please r&r my poem!

Seems you're flexibility to make what you wish... that's very good... so does the poem ;)

interesting, cant exactly say i like this one all that much actually, kinda weird and too mushy in idea for me as well as being distant, never too good in a poem, esp when its not one that you can find intrigue in a person and what they were thinking yet being kinda separate, if that makes any sense, but in theory, i guess its good

very very cute

beautiful. so much hurt and pain and longing in there. but such a sense of regret. reminds me of me. *eyes start to get all misty and then i brake into sobs and run away* lol ok good job

e.e ur not tt cold and distant.. ur qt warm. tts y ppl keep telling u stuff to solve but. u cant solve ur own. T-T

i lyk d 3rd and 4th verses btw. heh.

What's eating you really?