Sounds like a blessing. Beautiful. I have a hard time thinking postively as well. . .I have parties when I write something happy.
-Jessica

so awsome i really like your poems the flow went so damn well

Wow. I totally love this poem. It flows wonderfully, and it definitely made my day. I apologize for not reviewing sooner; thanks for reviewing my poem.
~Eirthe rose Crystal

I can understand why she cried. It is very good indeed. Don't stop writting like this! ;)

i doubt it will happen for me, but its a nice thought

hey
great poem...makes me actually think its possible that one day thses things will happen
great poem:)

one day, this poem will be fact,
one day, i will review with tact.

yay, i rhymed!
anyway, this is a lovely poem and i like its style. good, consistent rhyming scheme.

very positive, people need something to look forward towards otherwise they find no point in going on, but just as true is that when you never reach there it makes other things in life so much more painful, love the poem, fairly well written and interesting, nicely done

Perhaps that 'One Day' will never come on Earth... but after death, things will change. (Not that I'm saying go kill yourself!) I really like this poem. I can see why your aunt loved it. Wonderful work.
-Frodo

p.s. Why am I called Frodo? Well, first off, I hate my real name. Secondly, I'm part of this online LOTR fellowship thing... just a group of friends kinda that just talk about whatever on the internet...so yeah, I'm Frodo. I'm not a kinky hobbit or Legolas fantasizer either! anyway... hope that fills you in there. Now if you'll excuse me, I must go and watch my precise X-Men marathon that is on today. (Yes, I know, I am a loser... but I love it!)

Very good poem... One day...It's always what we're all saying in the back of our minds...

really positive poem...! wish i could write something as positive as this...great work...keep on writing...the words heal the soul in many ways..!

damn that was good. thank you so much for writing this, it kinda cheered me up. its a really good poem, it like, i duno im not good at reviewing, but it isnt like a normal positive poem. its very dreamlike and yet it has this reality thats hidden in shadows behind it. god now uve made me think, thanks a bunch. LOL

nimue webweaver

haha.. but. i reali tink dis is gd. i noe ive told u dis but. it's reali.. optimistic and uhhh swt? d rhyming scheme is gd..

i cant rhyme for nuts. argh.

What will happen?