 Aryaveiel Skycryer 2003-03-10 . chapter 1Thank you so much for reviewing! What a happy person am I.
On the story; I'm not much for Sci-Fi (except Michael Crichton), so I can't judge the content, but I liked your use of language. Gave a very precise view of what was happening. Good description of the relationship between "complements" as well. If I were a Sci-Fi fan, I'd be all over this one. |
 James Rain 2003-03-03 . chapter 1This is extremely well-written, but the character's names are hard to pronounce, I kept seeing and saying Chrysler in my head insted of Khyssher. Still, a nice read. I believe he's going to Earth, so I wonder who he'll meet when he gets there. |