I really liked the end of the chapter. I wonder if it's the end of the story, since there really aren't any author's notes here. If it is, then it's fabulous. I loved everything about this story and I really liked your two main characters.

This story is definitely getting more interesting and I like how the feelings are conveyed from Jens side anyway about Shinya. I hope that they end up being together. It seems that Shinya is really liking Jens.

Very interesting start to a wonderful story. I like how you portray the main character's emotions and his story is definitely unique among most of the stuff I read here in the manga section. I'm going to keep on reading this piece. I really enjoy it and if you'd like to or have the time, you can stop by and check out some of my works.

you know, jens actually means sex in Arabic. Just thought I'd mention that =P

That was an awesome fic! I really love the twisted logic that someone like Jens had, the way he never saw what his father did was wrong, just worshiping his mother through him, and that he was happy to let him do that. I'm glad that he found someone who he can be happy with, someone who can give him that worship that he wants so bad! *Squeals like a teenaged girl*~Sephy J

...THAT WAS A KOOL STORY!...MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!... ahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha!... CONTINUE!

Please update!! This is a great fic! I love it. But pwese! pwese pwese! UPDATE
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Please write more! But if you can't because of life's many whines to come back, I understand. Nevertheless, if you EVER get spare time just jot down a few words for the rest of us who ignore life's annoying whines!!

Um, yeah. Is there more? Please tell me that there is more!

Please write more. It's great! Yaoi isn't my thing but it's certainly yours! Write more!

hardcore...keep wrighting

disturbing...but beautiful.

very well written indeed.

trev.

excellent so far write more

Now he can let the guy worship him and they can get together. I have a sixth sense... and I know something anguishy will happen... I kinda like incest, if he was happy with it. True love or desire.. whatever.

AAh!
I'm loving this!
**...gotta do some math...
omg..i just love yaoi...yummy...