wow, u wrote that when u were 8? jesus, wow! lol, amazing poem!

This is quite long, but probably not TOO long. It describes the situation very well. Nicely done.

Ouch, that's gotta suck. . .makes for a really good poem though.

OH MY GOSH! you wrote this when you were eight? this is absolutly amazing! aack! i wish i could've written this when i was eight... i can bearly write this weel ad i've taken so many boring english classes on this too. (back to the poem) its so sad how you couldn't remember things... wow, did you ever get all the memories back?

hey you said it's not good it's REALLY good you said you wrote this when you were eight wow

good job

that's really good for eight i think. that musta been very hard to get through. that was a kool thing 2 post. i liked it.

One day

Your brother will wake up

And be nice to you

All those years

Of hostility

With hidden care

WIll carry both of you through

It's true! The same thing happened with me and my brother

I want to say I'm sorry about your Grandma, but I didn't know her and I suppose I don't know you. But- sorry. *hugs*

Hope you're ok.

Whoa. This is a pretty good poem. And a good topic, too. I wonder what it would be like for me to lose my memory... What would I be like the next day? *starts thinking*

But I'm glad you're still here, and you're still posting. Hope you're still writing.

Peace.

Munku-JGSPTV _

Wow...that's powerful.

Did you ever regain any of your lost memory?