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omgshMikey 2006-04-27 . chapter 1
It's really good. It sorta reminds me of what goes on in my head..but I get bullied worse because of my likes, hobbies, and the way I dress. I DO get called a goth, all the time. It bugs the poo out of me. I'm not a goth. Yes. NOT.

But really good. I really liked it.
HVK 2005-02-15 . chapter 1
DEATH TO PREPS! ROAR!

Okay, now that my customary insanity is out of the way...

This is a good poem. Good timing, placing, and everything.

SPULT!

WHO KEEPS THROWING THESE!?
chibi-otaku-princess 2004-01-28 . chapter 1
I LOVE YOUR POEM! I'm going to print it and have my friend Melissa write it on the board in the girls locker room for all to see! of course, i'll give you credit ^^ laterz!
blondehearted 2003-10-18 . chapter 1
omg. i love this poem! i know exactly how it is. i am not a goth. i just like black and loud music. THERES A DIFFERENCE PEOPLE. this really is goof though.
ChocolateCoveredEspressoBean 2003-09-19 . chapter 1
Wow. This is great! ^_^
I feel the same way sometimes. Awesome. ^_^!!
Animagess 2003-05-27 . chapter 1
This sounds disturbingly familiar. It's pretty amusing, too... I like this. This is good.

Anyway... haven't heard from you in a while. It's pretty funny to check out all the authors from FF.net. Some of them probably don't know they've got an account here.

Well, I'll check out more of your stuff later. Gotta go.
Tamara Raymond 2003-04-18 . chapter 1
I applaud you. It's inspiring, that's what it is. I love it, becuase I know where you're coming from!
Rieko Blade 2003-03-27 . chapter 1
Wow that is really true...Great Job my favorite line is

Your favorite thing to do is shop? Like, no way!
You obsess over Eminem? Wow, what a role model

that is very true...I don't like to shop>_>..I hate croweds...and people ^^ I HATE THE WHOLE HUMAN RACE!!HAHAHAHA
Hiei-BAkura: Oh some one who think the same way we DO!
Ryou: ><
Yami Blade: That's was a Great Poem thingy>< keep it up!
GoogleCorelli 2003-02-05 . chapter 1
AUGHHHH!!! rebel against the evil preps!!!! excellent poem...hmm, i know some people who should read this!
Blue Mystic Moon Warrior 2003-02-01 . chapter 1
hahahahahahhahahahahaha

Lisa: -_-

Kirstie: don't take it like that!!! the joke was really funny!!!

Lisa: THERE WAS NO JOKE!!!!!!!

Kirstie: o_O oh. oops. and u already got my other comments when it was in your notebook at school.
yu0chan 2003-01-29 . chapter 1
I really like it I thinks it's cool
Catella Estelle 2003-01-28 . chapter 1
Say random cruel things in Japanese/Spanish/whatever langauge you speak and get the funniest looks from them(being preppies). Though you go through random torture from them but hell, preps are idiots.
Yu-gi-oh ain't all that bad.
Preferrably(did I spell that right?) I like Kenshin, Evangelion, Zoids...daa..Anime in general is Awesome! (Minus Pokemon) ^_~

Lalala, I'll be quiet.

Psst, great poem! Basically says everything I think when I walk past them. ^_~ Great job!

I swear I'm leaving now!
YourEden 2003-01-28 . chapter 1
Hey! I was once like you and I had the same feelings when people put me down. The thing is though you have to pick yourself up and get outta the habit that your in! Im not saying go and start liking Eminem (Please dont) Just maybe you should grow up before they do, that way you would prove yourself. Deep down you have to admit that liking a tv show like Yu Gi Oh is pretty sad... you should be out with your freinds doing things instead of at home searching on the internet for more pics of "so and so " who is from the show etc. I know it sounds mena but I was once like you. Its not jsut them. Its you to. So DONT blame others for your problems. Okay?
Valencia22 2003-01-28 . chapter 1
You go girl!!
Heaven Take Me Home 2003-01-28 . chapter 1
Nice little note at the bottom. Anyway on to the poem. That was a great piece of writing, and I must say that you described preps extremely well. Keep writing and don't ever let them get you down.
~*Autumn*~
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