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Reviews For: Smoke in the Wind

starlit blade
2004-06-19
ch 1, anon.
abuse*mock seriousness in voice* I'm sensing a wall between us. You can't seem to get out, and I can't open the fricking window cause it's jammed.
Alexiajennine
2003-02-12
ch 1, anon.
abusethe feelings that you put in the poem I can feel, it's very good
NovaKayne
2003-01-30
ch 1,
abuseoooh....*tingly* Good poem...I like the stagnant waters and blunt nails. GJ!! :-D
Aftertaste of a Razorblade
2003-01-29
ch 1,
abuseDamn.

That's good. I love the imagery.
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