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Reviews For: Smoke in the Wind
starlit blade 2004-06-19 . chapter 1
*mock seriousness in voice* I'm sensing a wall between us. You can't seem to get out, and I can't open the fricking window cause it's jammed.
Alexiajennine 2003-02-12 . chapter 1
the feelings that you put in the poem I can feel, it's very good
NovaKayne 2003-01-30 . chapter 1
oooh....*tingly* Good poem...I like the stagnant waters and blunt nails. GJ!! :-D
Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-01-29 . chapter 1
Damn.

That's good. I love the imagery.
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