Brett-Man...great story. I think I know right where this story came from kid. This one hit me Cafe style. Keep 'em coming.

wow. this leaves me almost speechless. you've touched on a major truth here - one I feel violently myself, almost to the point of desparation. Oscar Wilde said that Sorrow is the ultimate form both in Literature and Life, and it's an absolute truth. Your writing is immensely sad, cynical, harsh, the grimy truth always showing through, which is why I love it. Wonderfully revealing piece.