Reviews for The Blood Guardian

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NightOwlscribe 2006-06-03 ch 20,	This was a really good fic that I enjoyed to read. The battles were intense, but that's one of the reasons it was such a joy to read. I only have one complaint, though it has nothing to do with the writing itself. You scarred me a bit when you got into his scar hurting-reminded me way too much of Harry Potter. Harry Potter=scar pains...but otherwise I luved this so keep up the good work and write a sequel ASAP!
Sidereus Phoenix 2004-06-09 ch 20,	ello, well first of all I have ask if you have ever thought of publishing. I have read a few of your stories and ideas and plots are amazing. Your characters also build more shall we say, character, as the story progresses.There are a few mistakes, as is expected in something that has not been read over by 40 billion different editors, but they are minor and do not effect the fluency of the story. I especially love the ending for this story. I sincerely hope you contiue to write and to see some of your work on book shelves some day. Cheers! Sidereus Phoenix p.s. you might want to look over the ending of Evolution and put more thought into it. As it is now it sounds very rushed and almost like you get fed up and bored of writing it. Other then that its brilliant.
Hobbit Boy 2003-09-22 ch 20,	Amazing! This is one of the best stories on the site! I can't find anything wrong with this whole story, try selling it! Now! Go! Write More! Sequel!
Spawn2099 2003-08-26 ch 20,	... That was amazing dude. I loved it! Like Hypatia said, you should publish this! I cam't wait for the sequel, I bet it'll be even better. I'll definitly be watching out for Cold Blooded Mercy, I can't wait to read that. Once again, good job on this story, it's one of the best that I've read on this site.
Hypatia 2003-08-25 ch 20,	The END? No! I won't let it be. DSL, this is the best one of your stories I have read. I mean, this was very, very good. Seriously. This is the best completed story I have read on this site and maybe even the best any story I've read on this site. Do something with it. Edit it a little and put it in a contest or something. Maybe even publish it. Heck, I'd buy it. I'm completely serious. Use what you have. I look forward to your future projects. Hypatia
Hypatia 2003-08-21 ch 19,	A motorcycle chase! You never cease to amaze me, DSL. That was really - tries to think of a synonym for "awesome" - ouh, what the heck - that was really awesome. Awesome action, awesome characterization, awesome layout of the chapter, awesome dialogue, awesome reappearance of Vaughn, and awesome - AWESOME - change of Rae's character after his experiences. And thanks for the reply to my question, though it was short. And once again, awesome job. :-D Hypatia
Spawn2099 2003-08-20 ch 19,	Dude your story's awsome! So that's how you write fight scenes eh? That's cool, i never thought of it like that. Anyway, this story is so good, i started reading your other works! I really like Evolution, it's a really cool story. Anyways, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Hypatia 2003-08-19 ch 18,	Awesome job. Man, I haven't reviewed in a while -- but awesome job on all three chapters. The fight and the world you have set up is very well done, very convincing. I know this is a weird time to ask since all your stories are filled with fighting, but when did you learn to write fight scenes like that? That's really cool. I hope you don't kill Vincent. I hope Emma does something to help him. If she doesn't, I hope you kill her. Sorry, maybe that was a bit harsh. :) Looking forward to the next (and is it final?) chapter. Hypatia
Spawn2099 2003-08-05 ch 17,	Wow, your story is so cool! I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^
Zek Sone 2003-08-04 ch 1,	Great Story. I like the setting. You shuold enter in some contests.
Wamaster 2003-08-01 ch 17,	Cool chapter man. Can't wait to read the next one
war master 2003-07-22 ch 16,	That is the best chapter yet. If the rest are this good then who ever is reading this story is i9n for a treat. Make me right.
JyuJyubii 2003-07-17 ch 16,	Dude could your story kick anymore **?! I absolute love Rae. He's so..well..human! Man i hope you didn't kill him off. please please please please write more! and while your at it please read my new story out called Escaping the Dark..okay?
Hypatia 2003-06-12 ch 15,	Well done, DSL. I don't trust Emma. Or I don't like her. Or something. Good plot progression and stuff. Write more.
War Master 2003-06-05 ch 15,	Interesting. He is still having the dreams. Can't wait to read the next one

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