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| Rozlin 2005-02-07 ch 1, | abusewhat happens when you fear love? |
| Crazy Arms 2004-01-03 ch 1, | abuseGood poems, keep writing |
| Ebony Falcon 2003-12-23 ch 1, | abuseHey steph. This is pretty good. =^~^= |
| Pretty Barn Owl 2003-02-16 ch 1, | abuseI love them both! I think I agree with you, though. The first one is best. I do have a suggestion for you, though. In between them you shouldn't have put anything because even the best poem in the world can be ruined by bad presentation! You should have a gap between the poems to separate them, but leave it as a gap. I think this 'set' of poems is excelent because they really connect and contrast you thoughts on two things. By the way, thanx for the review! |
| deadkitty1 2003-02-03 ch 1, | abuseoooh! i like poems that rhyme personally but i'm bad at making poems (especially 1 that rhymes!) ur's though was cool! |
| Lady Lunara 2003-01-31 ch 1, | abuseI read poems, and I write poems I'm a two in one special (was that dumb or what) Hey I like your poems they're pretty good.I got a new poem up like you and I wonder if people leave reviews for poems also.N-E-Ways good poem write more soon. |