what happens when you fear love?

Good poems, keep writing

Hey steph. This is pretty good. =^~^=

I love them both! I think I agree with you, though. The first one is best. I do have a suggestion for you, though. In between them you shouldn't have put anything because even the best poem in the world can be ruined by bad presentation! You should have a gap between the poems to separate them, but leave it as a gap. I think this 'set' of poems is excelent because they really connect and contrast you thoughts on two things.

By the way, thanx for the review!

oooh! i like poems that rhyme personally but i'm bad at making poems (especially 1 that rhymes!) ur's though was cool!

I read poems, and I write poems I'm a two in one special (was that dumb or what) Hey I like your poems they're pretty good.I got a new poem up like you and I wonder if people leave reviews for poems also.N-E-Ways good poem write more soon.