   TopazDragon 2005-09-04 . chapter 7Please update soon, this is pretty good. I must find out whats going to happen next |
 Siamh 2003-05-03 . chapter 7Wow good chapter! I loved it! Update soon! k bye |
 hazelvere 2003-05-03 . chapter 7love it! please write more! caleb sounds really hot! |
| Siamh 2003-04-15 . chapter 6 WHy do you always end chapters like that? Always a cliff hanger eh? Hmph your mean. Well good chapter loved it! |
 Tracie 2003-04-12 . chapter 6 Love it! Love it! Keep updating! :) |
| klara 2003-04-11 . chapter 6 keep going. its starting 2 be interesting...so go on sis... |
| Siamh 2003-04-07 . chapter 5 Why do you keep on doing that? You always end with a cliff hanger! I mean come on! Ending with someone clamping a hand over her mouth was a good ending though... you have to bring the guy cloaked in black in the story! I am starting to get annoyed! Great job though! |
| LadyFalcon 2003-04-07 . chapter 1 Really good so far. Please please please continue. Must read more! |
| Casey 2003-03-29 . chapter 4 Awe man!! I love this story so far, I hope you update soon! |
 Rara Wolf 2003-03-28 . chapter 3this is really coll, can't wait for the next one! |
| Siamh 2003-03-21 . chapter 3 You can't leave us with a clifhanger! And right there too! You are crule! Anyway introduse the no face man soon I want to see what he looks like! Good work though! |
| fic_chik 2003-03-12 . chapter 3 u need to keep writing! you're a grest author! |
| Siamh 2003-03-08 . chapter 2 I love this story! Please write more I want to know what happeneds! |
 Madame Mad 2003-01-31 . chapter 1This is an excellent prologue. You have a great writing style! I definitely would like to see you continue with this! Great job! |
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