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| Windswift 2003-04-24 ch 1,  | abuse... I have a feeling we have similar ideas, because I've already has an idea (and song that i want to use in one of my fanfiction fics) about a white demon and dark angel... Be yin-yang. Dark angels and white demons are the opposite sides. The white is made to look bright by it's darkness, althought it is not pure, and the same for the dark. and the two embracing opposites create a balanced whole (and if you liked that, then go to fanfiction and read my fic "Ramblings to No One, cause that's in there) |
| Ruby-Kate Gamgee 2003-03-02 ch 1, | abuseHey, I like this! Nice idea, i know how you feel to a certain extent, but I'm kinda greedy and would like to be both the black and white at once =) I like the rhythm to this poem, and the repetition works well. Love Kit (Half of Kit & Brit) |
| clifjumpr13 2003-01-31 ch 1, | abuseAn interesting take on the subject, but I think that deliberately refusing to make a decision is the worst possible choice. One that requires no commitment nor real effort, but that's just my random thoughts. As to the poem, other than needing some structure, its a good piece. |
| dollface and her cancer 2003-01-31 ch 1, | abuseAs a general rule, dream-invoked writings are the curse of humanity. Seriously. (At least they are for me, who never finishes a dream.. and rarely a story.) But this, this is great. Wonderful. Superb. Is that all? |