And a happy ending. Cool.

YEAH! It's finished, and the murder has been solved. Great fun, and as always wonderfully written. ^.^

*Dances a jig*
It's over...and no-one got--well, can't say that. Peeps did get killed. Ah well. *Throws ice cubes at Jacen*
"Go into the AFTERLIFE like HE PLANNED?" ! What are we now, Buddists? o.o I'm sorry, but that's what you made it sound like. >.> It clashed with the rest of the message. If God is in control, then why did Jacen plan to go into the afterlife, not being taken to Heaven?
M'done ranting now. ^^; Very nice, otherwise. Keep up the good work.

Can you beat up a ghost? Sounds like the boys will try if Efad isn't allright! Run, Jacen! ^^
Will they find her? Probably. Will she be in the same condition as before? 'Praps not. At any rate, the adventure continues! I'm happily awaiting the next chapter.

Mom and I and Nana came up with a theory! Jacen is the ghost that moved in after the old cotton gin burned! ^^ See? Makes sense! The old legend was that either a young boy (or his mama bringing his lunch) fell off the walkway and died. After that, it haunted the walkways between the buildings. See? Jacen moved into the next-oldest house he could find, minus the church. O.o So, there you are.

O.o he killed his own brother??0.0 Oh well, great story none the less I suppose. ^.^ I'm glad you didn't obandon the poor thing.

Whee! They're in over their heads, all right! O.o I won't be surprised if one of them ends up shot. ...they lead busy lives, your co-authors. ^^ Do keep it up. I'm eager to find out how they wind up! *Rubs hands together in anticipation*

Exciting stuff happening! Little rushed and pat, perhaps, but still interesting! What happens now?

excellent, mate! keep it up!! ^_^
Shire
One Ring
Raine an Frodo

SHITSHITSHIT!
that is not good, that is not good, that is NOT good, that is NOT GOOD!
** guys, ze missiles are coming! FIRE ZE **! but i am le tired. okay have a nap THEN FIRE ZE MISSILES!
ok don't ask i'm trying to distract myself from the incredible wave of fear that has seeped under my skin and into my bones. WOW! jacen's murderer. SHITAKI MUSHROOMS! ** MAN! oh dear yes.
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please?
*cutesy face*
^_^
:D
Love from the ONE and only,
me})i({
Shire
One Ring
Raine an Frodo

*gasp*
wow. that is really all i can say. wow. this is REALLY good. *applauds*
wow.
WOW.
Love from the one and only,
me
Shire
One Ring
Raine an Frodo

*grins*
*cackles maniacally*
Excellent. ghosts are wonderful people.
this one seems particularly mischievous ... love it!:D
and I bet he's hot, too.
you know, I've met a ghost before. talked to him, too. he was an old man.
have you read any of my stories? please do, it would make me SO happy! *cutesy face* please?
^_^
yay! *claps* ^_^
:D
Love from the one and only,
Me
Shire
One Ring
Raine an Frodo

holy shitaki mushrooms!
very very good, excellent, i like, i like! :D
Love from the one and only
me
Shire
One Ring
Raine an Frodo

awesome!
:D
great story mate, keep it up! *thumbs up*
luv how Efad (wot an original name!:D) hangs out with only guys so far. story is very realistic. keep up the good work and update! well update on chapter six. i haven't read the other chaps yet but i will don't you worry. oh yes. now goodbye.
Love from the one and only,
me})i({
Shire
One Ring
Raine an Frodo

poor ghosty boy.