me again ^_^ well you know how much i hate reviewing a bunch of one authors stories all at a time, but all of your work just deserves a lovely comment :P honestly though, i had to tell you what i thought of this piece. (do not read ahead expecting 'constructive criticism') i think this was one of the top five most amazing stories i've ever read. ever. (And i've read ALOT) i love the imagery you provided, and oh god i could also identify with this in a way that i could never identify poetry. everything here, it was just amazing, i don't think that any words no matter how long or praiseful could amount to what i'm actually feeling after reading this. do me a favor, WRITE A FREAKING NOVEL! i just know that you could be bigger than King. Rice, Cook, or whoever. you have amazing talent, one that i've never seen before. so just, do something with it. oh, and publish this story okay? imagine how many people could be affected by this. just outstanding.

GREAT JOB! ^_^ WELL DONE!