'we will never be alone'

talk about an ending... such strong imagery, well done.

I can picture someone all alone in the desert just wandering, trying to find their way. This is a great image poem. Oh, I know you didn't rhyme in this one, but you really are great a rhyming contrary to what you told me.

Cirien Phoenix

I loved this line -

"Shunned from normal

Exiled away from cynical

Only left to be individual"

What an awesome way of putting it. I dunno why I like it so much...I just...do.

Keep writing!

Namir Swiftpaw

Wow. I like this! Man, I'm never sticking my feet in a desert...depending on the situation. If you're gonna offer me money to do it then...

Very morbid...it's you!

Wow...this was really cool. I liked the whole concept behind it. Keep up the good work!

Heart of the Sword

This is a really lovely poem. You are a great writer!

I love the ending/the last sentence. You did a wonderful job writing this!

*_* Hello! This poem was really cool! I like the last stanza. It really ties it all together *_*

-Nev