Bryce!

Gah, we haven't talked to each other in forever. I totally miss you, like, super hard. Please email me. I'm living in Boston now, so maybe I can drop by sometime.

Please please please email me.

Luv & HugsEddie

As I know you've been noted about before, the chapters do seem a bit short, but the more I think about it, the more they seem perfectly fine, especially for a comedic story.
Otherwise, I find Vyle's Villians to be one of the funniest stories I've ever read. Keep up the good work.

Nice touch with Bob, the Sage of Darkness! ^_^;; Geez, talk about crazy... And IL-CALIBAR was hilarious! I'm still snickering about it. ^_^;; Right now I'm working on an original fic of my own, but Sweet STILL hasn't replied, and it's been over two months! *Sobs* Well, anyways, gotta go. Nice story, keep it coming! Ja ne, Bryce-chan!

Sincerely,
Kimi the Kenlei (AKA: Kym. ^_~)

Good, good. But of course, constructive criticism is needed.

1. Iolis is not THAT happy. I can understand it, what with her seeing her Uncle in the first time in you-only-know-how-long, but next chapter(Which better be up sooner than this one, damnit!) have her be a little more like her parents described her. ...Hellion... That's pretty good! ^_~

2. Concerning her parents, I thought she killed them...? Oh well, I trust it's part of your plot. ...Vat vas zee plot again? O_o? Just kidding.

3. This isn't really criticism, but a suggestion. Have Ioris's "Torturing 101" teacher (Ms. Tina Rasput)be a beautiful, tall, brunette with all the right curves and wears skimpy outfits, but has a huge, disgusting, hairy mole by her lip that takes up half her face!! WUAHAHAHA!! And her "Dark Arts and Witchcrafts" (Get it? dark -ARTS- and witch-CRAFTS-?) teacher be Hecate! (You know? Kepper of the medallion of light and darkness? Remember, BOB?!)You can make up the rest of the subjects. This is YOUR story after all. And this is just a suggestion. You don't have to take it... *Sobs*

Anyways, good job so far. I likes, a lot! Update soon!

Sincerely,
Kimi the Kenlei

AMAZING! SPLEDIFFEROUS! I was extremely Incredebulated! You are awesome, great humor and nice plot. ^.^ I like it alot! Can't wait for the sequel!
*waits anyway*
*twiddles thumbs*
*elevator music*
WHENEVER YOU'RE READY! Jeez! Write it all ready!

-Your Boyfriend

YOU DON'T ACCEPT ANONYMOUS REVIEWS?!?! What kinda weirdo are ya?!

Yami Kimi the Ganstah Spectah of Defeat: Yo, dawg, fo da las' time, calm da f*ck down!

Bryce, this is my annoying, albeit helpful, Yami. You can call her Gaki, Ganstah yAmi KImi! Get it?

Yami Kimi the Ganstah Spectah of Defeat: Liar! Gaki is Japanese fo' Brat! You made dat odder sh*t up!

Yes, I did. But it fits, no?

Yami Kimi the Ganstah Spectah of Defeat: NO!!

Heh, heh. TOO BAD! Anyways, it's cool so far Bryce. But the day I let a friend go without constructive criticsim is the day hell freezes over. IT WILL FRICKIN' FREEZE OVER, DAMNIT!! ...Oh, right, here it is, then!

1. The paragraphs are a wee bit too long, try breaking them up a bit so we, your readers, don't get confyoozled. (Translation: Confused.)
2. LONGER CHAPTERS! It's not all that interesting if we bare hafta skim down at all!
3. Heh, there is no three! I'm just writing this cuase there usually is a three... MRS. WOOD IS A NAZI!!!

Yami Kimi the Ganstah Spectah of Defeat: You done scaring da hell outta yo friend now...?

Not even remotely! Holy brown shell-like thingys that serve as houses for carbohydrates! Those EVIL Dookie-headed electric ** butter and jellyfish ate my shoes! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! NOT MY NIKE GOODNESS! They will PAY! They will pay with their armpit hairs! I'ma gonna go to the land of foodstuffs and spiffy quotes now! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! BYE!

Yami Kimi the Ganstah Spectah of Defeat: ...Do I even need to say anything at this point...?

NOW, I'm done! Keep up the good work, Bryce, and I'll see ya at school!

Sincerely,
Kimi the Kenlei

P.S. Speakin' of quotes, here's one from God(Translation: Jhonen Vasquez.) that I think will suit you nicely:

Smile, you **.

..................BYE!!

This looks to be going someplace! I hope the next chapter arrives soon.