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| Jamith 2006-03-02 ch 3,  | abuseoh, that was said...grr to Holly |
| Jamith 2006-03-02 ch 2, | abuseI like the story, and your writtingbut I don't think that the "I love you" should have been so early, even though she knew whe was gay...I think maybe Rachael should have just said she liked her...I love you is kinda hard to pull off if you dont buld the relationship.. |
| jrkbrk 2003-11-10 ch 5, anon. | abusewrite more more more this story is one of the best lesbian story's that i have ever read and i think you shopuld keep going it is really good and very intersting. keep up the good work i cant wait fro chapter 6 |
| lilazngrl562 2003-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abusehey i liked ur story, i was wondering when u were gonna write more... im hopin that u can write more soon. |
| no more school ever 2003-05-10 ch 5, | abusereally good story. please can you update it soon! rach |
| Gabrielle 2003-04-25 ch 5, anon. | abuseVery good... i especially liked the Holly character..the "personality change" although very sudden, was very realistic. however i think more depth should be added to why exactly Holly became so angry? is that possble? |
| Another T.A.T.U. fan 2003-04-19 ch 5, | abuseThe chapter Innocence tore me apart. I hate those horrible scenes that play over and over again in your head; thats probably why I read those helpless romantic stories were one person is secretly in love with another who feels the same and one day they let it all out and everything works out... but things just aren't like that huh. |
| The-Messenjah 2003-04-11 ch 5, anon. | abuseBrilliant again! soo sad though. i hope it works out. |
| cut2bleed 2003-04-11 ch 5, | abuseso now Holly's a homophobe? this chapter was too short! |
| Gloria-Krasy 2003-04-10 ch 5, | abuseThis is really interesting story with complicated relationships. Despite Holly being so confused about this situation but I can't help but finding her very, very annoying. I know all the things that stop her being Miranda's friend but I don't understand her at all. Anyway, I'm interested in what will happen later. Keep on writing! |
| cut2bleed 2003-03-29 ch 4, | abuseThis is a good start.. I hope to see more chapters soon ok? But I think there's this really illogical drastic change in Holly's personality.. if she was Miranda's best friend for 5 years, wouldn't she have understood? At least she wouldn't have been so cold... maybe she would have just started avoiding Miranda or something.. But cutting off all contact? Oh well, it's just my oppinion ^^ I really want to see an update soon ok? |
| The-Messenjah 2003-03-23 ch 3, anon. | abuseWow... This is incredible. Keep on going. |