oh, that was said...grr to Holly

I like the story, and your writtingbut I don't think that the "I love you" should have been so early, even though she knew whe was gay...I think maybe Rachael should have just said she liked her...I love you is kinda hard to pull off if you dont buld the relationship..

write more more more this story is one of the best lesbian story's that i have ever read and i think you shopuld keep going it is really good and very intersting. keep up the good work i cant wait fro chapter 6

hey i liked ur story, i was wondering when u were gonna write more... im hopin that u can write more soon.

really good story.
please can you update it soon!
rach

Very good... i especially liked the Holly character..the "personality change" although very sudden, was very realistic. however i think more depth should be added to why exactly Holly became so angry? is that possble?

The chapter Innocence tore me apart. I hate those horrible scenes that play over and over again in your head; thats probably why I read those helpless romantic stories were one person is secretly in love with another who feels the same and one day they let it all out and everything works out... but things just aren't like that huh.

Brilliant again! soo sad though. i hope it works out.

so now Holly's a homophobe? this chapter was too short!

This is really interesting story with complicated relationships. Despite Holly being so confused about this situation but I can't help but finding her very, very annoying. I know all the things that stop her being Miranda's friend but I don't understand her at all. Anyway, I'm interested in what will happen later. Keep on writing!

This is a good start.. I hope to see more chapters soon ok?
But I think there's this really illogical drastic change in Holly's personality.. if she was Miranda's best friend for 5 years, wouldn't she have understood? At least she wouldn't have been so cold... maybe she would have just started avoiding Miranda or something.. But cutting off all contact? Oh well, it's just my oppinion ^^ I really want to see an update soon ok?

Wow... This is incredible. Keep on going.