Please update soon!I'm a big fan of all your stories!I especially like Dark Phoenix Saga!

ah! i love this story its just amazing please continue soon!

Very very good, creepy in a way, espacially how Luna's voice sounds like in my mind. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! ^_^

Now Rei knows about Luna ^_^ I didnt think that Yuki was cold and distant, yet ^.^

must.have.more.please! ^_~

~Iris

Sorry about the slow review but here it is!
AHH! GIL! *hugs him* ^_^ Always a dork, eh? ^_~

~Aphy the Almighty

ooh.what's she gonna do!? more please ^_^

jamie, i might not review, but i like the story. lots. :D

^_^...(doesn't know what to say) i bet rei can see our dear luna now! **cackles**

u noe wat, i luv this story the best among all of the other. *Sigh ghosts...

^_^ That is all.

~Aphy the Almighty

very creepy (in a way) and very umm....(i forgot what i was going to say!) creepy? sorry i had everything in my mind and it went blank for a second....

I have to say, you picked a tought genre to write in. There have been so many stories dealing with the 'Ghost in the House' idea that most people shy away from it, for fear of being lumped into the dreaded catagory of 'mediocre'. You're doing pretty well so far, though; Luna's character has obviously gotten the most attention, although Yuki shows a lot of potential. If they're going to play any kind of signifgant role, however, you might want to pay some close attention to the rest of her family, as they seem a bit underdeveloped. Your writing is nice and smooth, and the only criticism I have on that note is Luna's narration in the early part of the story; your first line of third-person is immediately interrupted by more dialogue from Luna, and it really throws the flow off. You could possibly consider redoing some of it, and having the third-person parts stand on their own, with no input from Luna. Overall, you've got a story here that shows great promise. Good luck!

Meh, too lazy to sign in.

Wheeeee, I liked it but then again, I always do ^^ *flashes the peace sign* GO JAMIE!

~Aphy the Almighty

O_O what a sad, BUT great story

will there be....MURDER????? XD

mooooooooore soooooooooon! ^_^

~Iris