One tiny detail. Malaysia was created in the 20th century. The correct anme for the area will be Malaya during the Victorian era. But good work upping the amp with the dark syndicate thing.

Izrael & Alice sound as if they've a special bond with each other. Is Alice able to channel her vision to others intentionally?

This is the classic detective story. Sherlock Holmes, Count Cain... And you remembered to write in a valet for our nobleman Black Sherlock. That trick he pulled on Miller is so sly. Jolly good show!

... ... ok, it's so lik a filler... ... but, i won't blame you, but update with a nice chapter please! so yea, although this is lik a filler, but it's quite nice too. ... ya, so ya, cya!

so nice, luv it! update real soon, k?

So you finally updated... Kya! This is SO good! And then now, you must update sooner! SOONER and I mean it! I love it, mysteries and such! I want more, more and MORE! *smiles brightly* If not, you're gonna get it from me... *eyes glinted eeriely for a moment before it turns back* Ja, update soon!

Wah... you're really a very very good writer... please update soon! This story captivates me too... Simply, every story you write are sO nice!

exciting...well...sortof keeps my goin...>_^

Again, terrible tenses. And mixd up words and mispellings. Have somebody edit this ASSAP! It is TERRIBLE to read. The story line is fine. Just fix it!

CASE SOLVED! Ack, that sounds so nostalgic. Like I'm reading again one of those old Sherlock Holmes novels my gramps keeps around. This is starting to have an English feel to it. I could almost imagine Izrael and his Britsh drawl...kawaii! Anyway, at least your cops don't swear and say 'bloody-' every other word like most London cops.

Ack, 1am already! GTG... Read more after I finish my thesis. Ja ne~

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foxdance

Nicely done. A bit of tense glitches here and there, but you carry this story pretty good.

*hugz Izrael* So heroic! Can I borrow him? I want him for a plushie :)

Oh, by the way, I'm just confused (again). His father is the Duke of London? Since titles of English & French nobility are named after their estate land's name, does that mean that their family estate is named 'London'?

foxdance

OOh, I love Kaori Yuki, too. Very snatching storyline here. Gonna read it all :) Anyway, I noticed you said that Count Izrael is the son of a departed duke. Well, the dukedom is actually inherited by the eldest son when the duke dies. While the duke still lives, the eldest son has the title of Marquis. So I presume Izrael has an elder brother?

foxdance

At last an update! Nice ending! Keep up the IzraelXAlice pairing. They are too cute!

I really liked it ! please update soon!
And also I loved your writing style , every character really had there own unique personalty . I loved it so much.
And if you like sorcerers , and action/adventure please please please check out one of my stories.
Anyway I loved it so much ! Please Update soon to Chapter 9 ! Please !
-Destin Scar

So the culprit is Elizabeth's father... *shudder* what a disgrace!

By the way, aw how sweet of Izrael... *blush* I think Alice and Izrael make a good couple! That's your pairing right? And Shean with Dr. Gray? *cough* *cough*

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