short, but my god how strong. it is somewhat detached, so i cant gather whether you are upset or not, or indeed if it was a real event. but im not sure if that is actually a bad thing...

What's inspiring all this?

Nice work! I like how you contrasted the past and the future.

Heart of the Sword

Hey, this is kinda good! I like this! Short but descriptive. I really like this line: "A(n?) iridiscent glow approaches". That was good...

Whee! *disappears*

Sad, sad, sad poem. Kinda chilling too. It's been a while since I checked up on you. Glad I did. Anyway, keep it

Sad. But, you did a great job putting it together. K/Writing!

Oh, Christ, that's sad. -_-

I like it, though - very short, simple, and to the point.

Keep writing poetry! I would like to see some more from you.

Namir Swiftpaw

Whoa... that's a little unusual. I like it though. . I saw two mechanical errors in the third line, but just simple little misspellings. Good job, I like it. Oh, and thank you for the review. .

Toireasa

How utterly sad. A watery grave...*sighs*