Jason! We could be living on the same wave length of favorite historical people. Keep up the good work.

much love,Juliet.

Huh. The bit about him not being Greek caught me off guard, really. But I like the way it all sounds so grand, so very unafraid as Jason is. The tone of the poem is perfect. I like the part about Jason was not of the sea and better for it.

Your talent just makes me want to cry...

And read more..._

Stunning, as always. You break your lines and stanzas in very interesting places, and it really contributes to the rhythm and the mood... I'm going to have to try this!

this one reminds me of the isaih one with the name repetition and such, and like that one, i loved this poem too. it's so epic sounding, as the story of jason should be told. great job!

I tend to like your style of reiteration, and I don't know why. It's usually a poetic turnoff, but in your case it makes stuff more interesting to read. And I always tend to like the later stanzas more, not that the early ones are bad per se, but you have really strong endings. kudos!

EG