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prancu 2008-11-29 ch 7,	I just read your story all the way through from ch 1 to ch 7, and let me tell you that I'm awestruck with your brilliance. It's so well written, with one event leading clearly to the next in perfect sequence. Also, the characters are very well developed and the reader can relate to them well. I had a 20 min presentation for school that I should have been doing, but I couldn't stop reading your story. In ch. 7 that abrupt revealing of Auley's past is intense and surprising but it was hinted well in previous chapters. Am i correct in assuming that the strange book Casimir saw behind the fairy tale book has something do with the mystery? That's my brilliant assumption, but of course I can't be certain because you're the genious writer here. Anyway, keep up the great work and update soon! Please!
Bloodfeeder 2008-09-21 ch 7,	OOH, we have PLOT!!such an amazing thing! I really like how the intro to the story was almost like a seperate story completely, and then suddenly there's all these new things coming in after that part. I also think that the way you made Auley skittish of sex and rather intmate stuff like that because of Vaymas ingenious. And then the way that Casimir accepts everything without question from Auley is just so perfect. it's like they were made for each other. Lee
the-typical 2008-01-30 ch 1,	favoriting!
xXMissyxX 2008-01-12 ch 7,	Wow! This is very good. if u lyk writing this kind of stuff, I think I have the perfect book for you to read. It is called Shield of Stars. It is by Hilari Bell. It is the first book in it's series. And it also has lttle bits of shounen ai. I think you would ennjoy this book emencly even though it is a little easy to read. Update soon bc this story has got me hooked and u r realing me in.
LaylaLivesLoosely 2007-12-11 ch 7,	Looks like this story's been deserted, but I enjoyed it =]
caramel blazers 2007-08-15 ch 7,	nice story but the last chap is kinda unbelievable.
Nesquik Girl 2007-04-24 ch 7,	Auley is the "act done out of kindness", isn't he? Casimir's brothers... played... with him but he was nothing but kind with Auley. Is that it? Am I way off? I'd really like an answer... It's amazing how the story changed drastically from start to pseudo-"finish". How it took the fairy tale turn after the falling in love part. I didn't see that coming. I actually thought the seventh chapter was the last one but apparently not. I hope you'll continue it... Pretty please?
Tisbee 2007-04-19 ch 7,	Just wanted to say what an awesome time I had reading this story. It was great to begin with, and even better when I began to understand the bigger plot you had (have?) in store. I realize it's been a long time since you've updated, and I know full well that never means anything good when you're a busy author, but please know that I'm a corrupted fan, and I would love it if you'd continue. :)
Nub in Denial 2007-02-18 ch 7,	Heh... I started this story right when I was about to go to sleep with the intention of reading the first chapter and then retiring to bed but got sucked in. Now it's really late and I have to get up extremely early in the morning to go to a workshop on a program called DTBY for babysitting and educating little kids. I'm going to be immensely tired and possibly cranky. The thing is... I don't regret it one bit. This is a mesmorizing story I must say and I hope you update soon. -DrownedDenial
Kyle's Precious Little Girl 2007-01-28 ch 7,	Oh my god! This story is so awesome! I love how you've involved all the fairy tales and stuff. That will surely make this story very interesting! I can't wait 'till you update! Please do so soon! -Precious
Gravilove19 2006-12-19 ch 7,	I love your story and I really wish you would update XD good luck.
Not Good Enough For Heather 2006-11-20 ch 7,	hmm... i dont know whats wrong with you but you need to update maybe you've had writers block... for three years... or something... but that doesn't mean you should just give up! this is a great story continue it please? mmk?
Jowaco 2006-11-06 ch 7,	Wow! This is an amazing story, altough would it be safe to say that there might not be an update coming in the near future? Would love to read more from you!
Tetnis 2006-09-14 ch 7,	Your writing is incredible. This story is the most fantastic piece of literature that I have read all year, and that's really saying something, considering I re-read the Lord Of The Rings trilogy and the Vampire Chronicles by Anne Rice this year. I seriously sat at the computer, laughing (and probably looking like a complete moron in doing so) at some scenes, I cried at others. Literally cried. Your characters are easy to relate to, and incredibly easy to get attatched to. I would lose sleep at night if I didn't give you the highest possible regard for this book. Please keep going! I'm eager to see your next installments! Lots of love, Lacklustre. ((P.S. : I realize that my email adress "lackluster_soul@hotmail.com" is spelled incorrectly, I actually inherited the account from a friend rather than creating it, and hold no responsibility for the spelling error.))
chrnoskitty 2006-08-12 ch 7,	This is your 115th reviewer... I just wanted to say that. I love your story, and hope that it gets updated soon. But, seeing as it hasn't in 3 years... I can guess that it probably won't be... Which is really really sad, since the main plot keeps sucking my mind back to it... I really love your writing style, though one think does make my head hurt: Your HUGE paragraphs... I usually have to re-read them thrice or more. if it's not too much trouble, could you chop your big paragraphs like that in half? Anyways, I'm really in awe with this story, I do hope you continue it... I may ask you about it if I see you on Aim (Samcatssam is my name =3)... Well, keep up the great work. I'll be watching you!

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