   swtdreamz101 2005-08-25 . chapter 1wow i feel like i'm in a disney movie. haha. whoa...desire and lust?? well it's sweet nonetheless, congrats on being in love :D |
 aquamoon222 2005-02-20 . chapter 1Lovely. Has a very happy mood to it. very sweet. I really like it!
By the way, thankyou so very much for the reviwe. I'm all for constructive critisim! Flattery is always nice but I like getting help a bit more! |
 Aya 2003-12-12 . chapter 1 yes, it is very cliche...ok though I guess. |
 UnknownWanderer 2003-07-29 . chapter 1It flows, nice work. |
 C. Hoogkamer 2003-06-30 . chapter 1*searches for a suitable word* ..
...BEAUTIFUL! don't stop writing! |
 Blazing Sunset 2003-06-18 . chapter 1Extremely well written, unique, and SO sweet!!
^_^
Don't ever stop writing!
~~ Blazing Sunset |
 rosepetal1077 2003-06-17 . chapter 1love::sighs deeply:: beautiful |
 Psycho-kyugurl 2003-05-01 . chapter 1Your vocab - increduble!
Your style - unique!
Wow! |
 Pandista 2003-03-18 . chapter 1AY! ::Kicks fp.net:: I thought I reviewed this already! I DID REVIEW THIS ALREADY! STUPID WEBSITE!
::Ahems::
Anyway, onto the review. I read this over AIM, but I thought I'd leave ya a nice little review anyway. Your feelings really come through in this. It's really...deep...or something. Yeah. Keep writing!
~Tweek's Panda |
 Werewolf Nighteyes 2003-02-11 . chapter 1Nice. Sweet and sensitive.. And gawd, you have an awfully long bio! (which is good, cos' i can get to know you better) Keep it up! |
 Kowski 2003-02-11 . chapter 1*sighs*
Oh, i wish i had love....its ok though. I love this line:
enchanted touch
sweep me above to a
warm loving place only
with you.
it was very pretty and heartwarming.
Keep it up!!
Woo!! |
 Impressionist 2003-02-10 . chapter 1well...personally unless you're married I don'tthink such measures should be taken with a lover...and a seance...wow. a bit crazy there... |
 Dracori 2003-02-09 . chapter 1You like poetry don't ya? This was really pretty. Me like. You should make some stuff for movies too. I really don't like to make things for poetry but I do love to read poetry. Anyway I know you did'nt really like Vince R's(Gabe) story for the fairly odd parents and I don't blaim you. Trust me I've known the guy for 7 years. I know how he is. Just be patient with him. His other story is funny though. |
 Queenofrefuse 2003-02-08 . chapter 1sure, the idea is a bit cliche, but the writing is wonderful. i love the simplicity of the structure with the slightly more intricate descriptions. the imagery is great! |
 eleezyienne 2003-02-08 . chapter 1Good one.
But I just want to thank you for giving that review maniac bruneian aka Sakura Himura one good advice.
Anyway, that's all.
~eleezyienne |
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