I don't think this was your worst poem! I love ladybugs so I was kind of sad when it died, but the meaning is powerful. Good job!-Duskamber

Interesting poem with a good thought at mind.

I like the idea. Try rewriting it with the same theme in mind.

How...sad! Poor little ladybug. And here I was thinking you'd be...well...not angsty for once. I mean, it was about a FUCKING ladybug! O_o Sort of interesting, in a bizarre way...