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| Akurei Hikari 2003-04-07 ch 4,  | abuseGood chapter, write more. |
| Akurei Hikari 2003-03-04 ch 3, | abuseInteresting. I actually really liked this. Write more please. |
| Zib1 2003-02-11 ch 2, | abuseGreat ending...it ties in the beginning to what is obviously to come...and it made me giggle. Jazz's mood changes very quickly...and he's very trusting of someone he just met. I know, there's some strange recognization between the two of them, but still, it probably should have taken longer to become friends. |
| Zib1 2003-02-07 ch 1, | abuse*claps* Damn you and your addictive stories... Great beginning...you hint at something between Jazz and Savin in the future (*sarcastic* oh...what a shock...) and do a good job of showing Savin's apprehensive...ness...and confusion. And Jazz's annoyance and pain. Update quickly...please...please do... |
| AquaDragon1984 2003-02-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this! please continue! the whole dream kingdom/identical counterpart thing is so neat! |