Wow, I love this format. And the way you connect fears with colors. Very interesting.

Wow, if only I knew what those words mean...O.O

go you!

oh..that's so sad...oh my god...wow...%.%...I'm sorry about that. wow..what a horrible way to die. Me still loves you..

I STILL love you!

YEY! Me loves you!

...T__T Windy's poems are so sad/angsty/killthehornyandhappy~ Dun't be sad Windy! Kai loves you very very much! T__T Windy should write poems about fish and cakes and strippers!

I like that, especially the end =)

Gracious... that was quite sobering. I rather enjoyed it. Now I can quite happily go give myself a paper cut and pour lemon juice on it. ^~
I don't think you talk too much, just to let you know. And thinking too much might be a problem if you were a guy.
You put the wrong "too" in the second to last line...just thought I'd say so.
"I die enough"...
Umexcilious.
I love it.

Heh, that's very good =) Write more soon!

this was lovely ^.^ so simple, but so eloquent, and hopeful yet a -little- depressing at the same time... i like it.

E~! So pretty! ^^ You've got talent!

And all songs are poems, so don't think they're different for a second! (After all, anything that isn't prose is poetry!)

-Joist-san

too short i feel

and a very depressing song-like thing it is. ^^ YAY!! It's so miserable I love it!
You never told me about Lance... I'm sorry. >< That musta sucked. Not that it's really any of my business anyway...::shuffles feet:: ::uncomfortable silence::

I do like this one tho, it would be good to have an electric gee-tar and a violin together in it...

aw... that's miserable. I do like it though, it sounds like something I wrote when we did the poetry unit in school (just recently) Did I tell you one of my longer ones stemmed from your Vampire's Concubine novel-worthy literature? It did. :D good jaerb.

Wow, you actually wrote something =P

That's really pretty, I wish I could write like that! It flows well and it's pretty. Very pretty =)